Not bad, you need to work on you anatomy a bit more eg the face and size of the head, also the hands need working on. Cool work though keep it up! +5

ufak tefek problemler olsa da güzel ..monokrom olmasi da güzel..

Juro thanks for your comment.Your're right about the anatomical mistakes..I'm working hard.Sagol mustafa

nice idea, need more anatomy work but i like it

Spoky atmosphere ! but nice !

Good job.

Thanks guys

kind of hentai-ish submission here. as has been said, a little more work on anatomy would strengthen this. but the vines are great, the patterns from the twisting, the shading are all strong points. the drawn effects of the lighting are very nice and the receding levels of focus is well-done. good job.

good job carmella bravo, i very like it, great lines! 7/9

This has a somewhat "Poser-ish" feel to it, because the left arm is raised in a completely unnatural way, bending at the shoulder joint but leaving the collarbone horizontal and the trapezoid muscle uninvolved - a physiological impossibility, to say the least. The knees are shapeless. The neck, if you remove that "snake" that obscures part of it, is unnaturally long. Work on your anatomy knowledge.

Technique-wise, the lines are very mushy in many places... not "painterly loose", nor "elegant" - just mushy. Work larger size and reduce the image later, it helps; but most of all practice the color application skill.

Well, arenhaus I've waiting for your comment..It's better than I expected
I mean I was expecting like"Very very bad.What is that?What's the composition here?" and like that
Well you're right about anatomical mistakes.I'm working hard and I'll fix that.BUT,you're definetly wrong about that color stuff.Nobody is have to draw colorfuly.All of your paintings are colorful which is cool but you can't expect everyone to draw in blues and pinks and yellows and stuff..Why are you so against of monochrom pictures..Everybody has a style and you can't change that.I wanted a dark mood and a dark mood doesn't contain pinks and blues..Am I wrong?
Anyway thanks for your comment.I'll consider your advices.

Oh by the way Fresh and Grafiker thanks a lot

u did a great job my sweet dude =)

wow! excellent idea and composition!
i really like the colors and the style, keep it up! +8

Really original... I think that if you touch her you'll get poisoned
I admire your patience with all those branches!

Miss-Psycho, thanks a lot!

MayYeo, Thank you very much, yeah, she's poison ivy girl

This is really an interesting concept and subject! I like it!

Thankies!

nice work

I'm digging it alot! (I wouldn't have sex with her though...maybe if she loss the snakes..lol)

Arkaplan cok iyi,ama juro nun dedigi gibi "anatomi"....Belki figurun biraz daha akici veya dinamik olmasi iyi olabilir.....arkaplan +6/7 figur: 0
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The background is really good.But like juro said "Anatomy"....it may be good if the figure would be a little bit flowing or dynamic...Background:+6 figure:0

Evet biliyorum.Hic dinamik degil.Ancak ilk ciddi calismamdi bu.Duzeltecegim hepsini.Ama anatomide cok zor yaa
Neyse tesekkur ederim yorum ve puan icin
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Well,I know,you're right about anatomy but I'll fix the mistakes.
Thanks for commenting and voting on my work

nice composition, i liked the colours 6/7. keep going..

hmmm well this is a nic composition, good background idea..
in general there are some anatomical mistakes but some parts such as the left hand, torso and left shoulder cover the mistakes, showing you r on the right track... with practise you can do them better..

+6

gerci birkac anatomik hata goze carpiyor ama sol el ve omuz ile ustgovde nin duzgun cizilmis olmasi azbi calisma ile herseyi yola sokacaginin gostergesi olarak bu kucuk hatalari gozardi ettiriyor
eline saglik,

I like it though it might need some more light...